Black Poetry : my heart on paper

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by a-mere-man, Dec 10, 2003.

  1. a-mere-man

    a-mere-man Member MEMBER

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    Walk in these shoes


    no man knows how it feels until he has walked the same path with the same ambition the same mission, Until he has walked the same road with no light did i mention the same intentions. No new invention the same design and skill. if you can walk in my shoes it should bring out the same appeal.
    But you cant do it no person walkin The Lords green earth can. because nobody can be me...me this man. U cant walk in these shoes there just to tough; and yo feet...yo feet... Ha...dey just aint rough. U cant put on these bandages you dont have any splinters on the contrary man yo hands are too tender.
    Dont criticize me, put me under scrutiny especially when you dont know why i be me.
     
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    nice piece
     
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    Shoe' Nuff

    I dig this peace!
     
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    :wave: welcome to destee....
    i likes this poem...flow on
    hope to read more....
    welcome again:wave:
    :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found within
    from above i welcome u wit love :toast:

    indeed every man holds there own style
    so unique and rare can't be matched
    yes u are one of a kind .....welcome
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    a-mere-man Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your comments it makes me work harder.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed greatness is always higher we all strive to get it
    continue
     
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    Welcome to destee!!! I would like to hear more from you, thought provoking scribe.
     
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    Welcome to the fam! :grouphug:
     
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    Welcome...

    Love the way your scribed this...

    Emotive flow!
     
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