Black Poetry : My Heart Hurts, Again...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Feb 4, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't know what I should do anymore
    I'm just tired
    I can't get over the fact
    That it hurts so much more

    I feel I have no one I can turn to
    For advice

    I plan things out
    And they always go wrong

    What should I do?
    I run out of ideas

    I'm just tired
    So tired
    Of being let down

    I thought this was the best choice for me
    But now I see
    That it's another mistake
    And I'm tired of feeling this way

    If I could just get away
    And be able to think to my self

    Just to have someone there who understands
    I would love just to not worry again

    Every time I try to make something work
    Someone objects
    Now I'm in an okward position
    That I might regret

    I need some help
    And If only you knew

    I need someone to help
    Get through this pain

    I am trying to ease
    But still feel empty

    My emotions tied down
    Trying to make everyone happy
    Except myself

    Sometimes I feel
    Like I'll never be happy

    I want to make my own choices
    But someone always tells me

    I'm going the wrong way
    I'm going astray

    And now I don't even care
    I don't want to hear it anymore

    I don't care what I do

    My heart hurts
    And I want to get out of here.

    ....

    Lonely
    Refugee...

    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Stormy

    i felt dis deep within me
    the emotional pain and now
    i look up wit a smile of shine
    coz i know it won't be long
    talk to as often as u wish
    coz i'm listening intently sis......:(
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You

    I really appreciate it. You've alwayz posted something nice for me. What a friend! ha,ha,ha
    I like you!
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    keep shinning keep smiling knowing u can always
    count on me fo sho dat's what friends r 4.......if u
    need a hand i'll give mines stormy sweetie.
     
  5. M. O. A. B.

    M. O. A. B. Member MEMBER

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    HELP IS (ALREADY AVAILABLE) ON THE WAY!

    Go off on your own
    Someplace you can be (somewhat) alone
    It's really not that hard
    You'll be by yourself (but) WITH GOD
    And tell HIM (even though HE already knows)
    Just how tired you are of this rigamarole-
    Let HIM apply the balm to your soul
    As HE points you in the proper direction
    That you need/should be traveling in
    Because, while you walk this difficult road
    Known as LIFE-
    You're bound to encounter all sorts of strife
    And even though YOU may consider this journey-
    As a SOLITARY one
    Look up to the HILLS
    From whence YOUR HELP COMES!!!!!!*

    M.O.A.B (MENDE OMOWALE ASHANTI BLACKTHORN)

    *May HE guide and keep you during this and all times!
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Storm...

    Very emotional piece...

    Keep ya head up and smile through the heartaches...

    Love always hurts bad and then it hurts so good in the end...

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  7. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey

    Thanks GQ I really appreciate the advice!
    M.O.A.B. You're my angel bruh, good lookin out!
    Much love,
    Desert Storm
     
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