Black Poetry : My Hawaiian Vacation

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Polynesian skies
    Hues of gold
    Blue and red
    Ocean spray
    Mingled with fresh air
    Watching
    The maidens
    Of this tropical paradise
    As they dance the hula
    Telling stories
    With hip sways
    And hand gestures
    Communicating with me
    Enthralling me
    Exotic beauties
    Walking past and around me
    Serving me
    Entertaining me
    Their smiles intoxicating me
    Can’t get them out of my mind
    Like a drug I’m hooked
    Who put the tiny bubbles in the wine?
    I’m losing all sense of reality
    In the island of fantasy
    Aloha
    Mahalo
    Can’t get enough
    Lost in this dream
    Until I wake up to a cold snap of 18 degrees & snow

    Hey Yall!! My Hawaiian Cruise was awesome, and I saw some of the most beautiful people in the world....it was 80 degrees as I was lounging around in a t-shirt and shorts, watching hula dancers and the international crew (women of course) serving my food and drink....I loved it!! Then I get back to chicago and it's cold and snowing.
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome back!!

    this peice is excellent!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man welcome back to da windy city !!!
    u made me take a vision flyte wit dem hula dancers
     
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    This was a very visual peice ...made me want to pack my bags and book a cruise........
    I'm Glad you enjoyed your vacation to Hawaii......Maybe one day I be able to visit hawaii and lounge around in a t-shirt and shorts on the other hand maybe a skirt and a top to match....watching hula dancers and the international crew (men of course) *smile*serving me MY food and drink....And if I love it ...u best believe I'm not coming back ..i'll send for the kids and until their arrival I be like stella gettin my groove back ..the only difference i'll be in hawaii not Jamaica.......



    Bishop, this was indeed a write worth visiting...until your next write stay up and be blessed........
     
  5. Bishop

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    Why didn't you tell me you wanted to go..I would have taken you;)
     
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