Black Poetry : My Guts <The Gift>

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  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hate to write
    poetry rhymes and such
    all the time
    i say i'ma give it up
    keep this
    out of my mind
    if you love somethin
    let it go
    'f it comes back to you
    it's yours
    'f not you'll never know
    no
    let me try this again
    pushin my thoughts back
    inside
    keepin my flow intact
    as i ride
    see
    all i have is a shell
    of pride
    i ain't got no friends
    to play wid when
    i go outside
    oh yeah...
    there's Jack
    he use to kick it
    with my grandfather
    he claim he
    BLACK JESUS
    and what's kreepy
    is i sorta believe
    em'
    he'll give you
    a beer and a cigarette
    if you need em
    and he'll talk to you
    alone
    about how to get home
    to freedom
    all my other friends
    is dead
    all impossibly disguised
    as obstinant
    my mom thinks
    i'm an insane jerk
    every since
    i went into the
    military
    not like i could
    slang beanpies
    at the mosque
    when i moved to go
    to school with my father
    i made some plans
    but lost my mind
    strange
    i feel it's the
    "White Man's"
    design
    i caught pitches
    of reality
    sold to me
    by lost souls
    on this earth
    and in-between
    it pissed me off
    i ain't know
    what it mean
    phukk
    now i be dealin
    with a lot of
    energies
    each situation
    of my day is like
    exercising mutant
    abilities
    people say they can
    relate
    it's just a tease
    this vortex
    "e plubrus unum"
    this Italian dude
    told me that's some
    ancient deity
    but he was in the
    same psycho ward as
    me
    my life plays
    on the high keys
    relays
    back to me like a
    b movie
    the "ring" around
    my irisees
    **** man
    can you hear me
    we livin in conspiracy
    these demons be
    laffin at me
    cause
    i already died
    from enacting my strategy
    "TRUTH"
    you feelin me
    probably not
    why sacrifice
    your life for a world
    don't no one know
    you
    don't no one care
    mann i'm out there
    i'm studyin how
    to fix cars
    and computer graphics
    in the middle of
    nowhere-america
    i get nostalgia
    my ancestors
    were right here
    i heard the spirit
    horse
    screamed
    "RIDE OR DIE"
    but i broke
    into a seizure
    and couldn't ride
    off
    for months
    i couldn't think
    or speak
    i'd drive
    in my mother's car
    like i was
    smugglin a
    sawed - off
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you really dig deep within
    to release this flow
    much love
    flow on
    feeling you
    keepingit real
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Antar,
    extremely involved monsta flow
    so much in it......
    from the guts
    come our deepest realities
    wherein are our keys for our salvation
    from our guts.....
    if we don't bring it forth
    it turns on us
    in our miles of guts inside us
    and cuts us
    from our reality
    self is there
    deep inside us
    the distractors be working
    to keep us from our reality

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERY WELL LAID OUT AND EXPRESSED
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You went with your guts and dug deep, seeing more than you thought you could...keep flowing.
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Wow!
    This was deep
    and hot!
    Loved your flow!
     
  7. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace

    Bluewater- thanks sister poet, wurd- gotta keep it real

    Bro Rasheed- man, the words you had to add is so true one

    Thanks $$RICH$$ :grin:

    Yeah Watz, i'm diggin deepa and deepa and tearin down mental filters along the way...

    PurpleMoons- thanx :)

    one love,
    /antar
     
  8. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice scribe, feeling this flow, :deal:
     
  9. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wurd up
    thanks for chekkin me out
    THEONE

    one love,
    /antar
     
  10. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :deal: :deal: :deal: :deal: You make me :puke2:
    :lol:Naw you doin ya thing Ant I'm lovin something of your greatness once more:wave:
     
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