Black Poetry : My Guardian Angel.............

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My battle scars are like no other
    Its etched within my soul you have to look further
    Into this to figure out what I'm saying
    The disappointment I feel has me praying
    That whatever it is will pass over me
    I pray for light to appear to make me complete
    I can't understand why my life is always upside down
    Always causing me to wear an noticeable frown
    A stranger appear and say My child why are you sad
    Because old man I've been wrong so therefore I'm mad
    And then he say well child must you be mad with the world
    I tried so hard to be a good little girl
    Well my child you must hold your head up high
    If you have problems always look towards the sky
    Remember the skies the limit
    And then I say to him I'm always the last to finish
    I ask why must you care what I feel or say
    You probably don't have any troubles from day to day
    Everything I touch seems to turn to brass
    Sometimes I forget my manners and class
    I say to you child you must believe that one day a rainbow will appear
    And this rainbow my child will erase all of your fears
    You must embrace this sign that will fall before you
    At first you will be stunned and in a instant you would know what to do
    Run child as fast as you can for tomorrow will be a better day
    You must kneel before your Father and pray
    I ran as fast as my legs could run, and look back the old man was gone
    Gone where you may ask to the unknown
    I did exactly what he told me to do
    I wanted to see if his words to me hold true
    The next day a rainbow appear
    And all my old battle scars suddenly disappear
    My hunger, my thirst, my poverty, just seem to be no more
    For I believe my Guardian Angel came down for me to even the score
    We suffer and suffer but remember were not forever lost
    You must always believe in the Lord for all what he faught (for)

    My Guardian Angel...........
     
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    The Lord sends his blessings to us in so many ways, some clearer than others. One who recognizes their guardian angel when they appear, has been blessed indeed. I enjoyed the flow.
     
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    feeling every line and the depth of his will
    he often send that Guardian Angel wit all
    blessings and hope to continue on.........
     
  4. nevar

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    I thankyou both for the kind words.
     
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    Hi nevar
    I as well beleive in the angel
    and the smile coming from the rainbow
    I say to you child you must believe that one day a rainbow will appear
    And this rainbow my child will erase all of your fears

    and the fears will no longer be.

    Peace
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the input bluewater everytime i see a rainbow it means hope and prosperity to me.
     
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    Powerful Scribe poet...........
     
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    thanks info for you comment it means so much to me when someone takes the time to read me thanks for the love. looking forward to your flow as well.:hearts3:
     
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