Black Poetry : My Graceful Queen

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  1. naija-man

    naija-man Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verse1:From the momoment i layed eyes on you,
    I never felt a essence so true,
    I never saw true beauty till I saw you,
    It felt like the world contained just me and you.
    so don't treat me like i'm any other guy
    cos I ain't into playing games or telling lies,

    Verse2:I can never cause you heart ache or pain,
    coz me and the players ain't the same,
    Just thinking of breakin' you heart,
    Just shatters and tears me apart,

    Chorus:Mellow vibes and sweet melodies,
    I'll give my life for an eternity.
    I'd walk the the aisle willingly,
    My Graceful Queen will you marry me?(x2)

    Verse3The love I have you you is sacred,
    Strong emeotions will guide us through and we'll make it,
    and it will be such a wonderful site,
    on the day i see you dressedin white.

    Verse4My inner desires burn more than you know,
    along with my heart I give you soul,
    Upon you finger i place this ring
    You happiness to me, is my most cherished thing,

    Chorus:X1

    Verse2:and Chorus(Plays softly in the background)

    Voice:You have given me a feeling I can't describe
    Your like my fire that burns inside,
    my words alone are minor to the love you've given me
    And i repy you in the best way an man can.. by
    giving you my life and soul, forever.......Will you marry me??
    (Background music fades out).


    ©Naija-Man2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so divine and beautiful of a Queeneth gracefully
    love the flow break us off some more.............TYTE.......
     
  3. ScorpioStylez

    ScorpioStylez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice tune and words as I hear it in my head playing. :)


    If It's A Scorpio than It has Style
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...excellent sense of rhythm
    in this flow...
    I can mos def imagine this joynt...
    being a hit...

    oneluv
    Sage
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well posed enjoyed this
    thanks for sharing :welldone:
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :gossip: Hey I don't know if u know it or not but this is a real nice drop! :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reads like lovely words to a wonderful tune. Flow on.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let the music play!
     
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    Re:Graceful

    Very lovely song.
     
  10. toylin

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    Ain't love bee-yoo-tee-ful?
     
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