Black Poetry : My Good Old Friend

[jdj530]

Hey I say as a girl name lilmay walks up...I say hey she say hey is for horses hi and hello is for people...so I say hello how do you do? She say do I know you...then I say you may not recognize me I done changed over the past years, you hear...I done changed can't you see...do you hear me or is it just me...tell me something for me to know that you notice me...I guess not but I know you..and you should know me...you're my good old friend lilmay from da hood...well since you can't hear me I better do my part and depart...As old friends we are you shouldn't be far from where I live so see you soon,whenever you get there..my good old friend you.

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The sweet sensation of life enveloped me completely

 

[angelicsage]

love the rhythm
it just read so smoothly
and kept my attention
as I hung on to each
word to find out where
the conversation was going...

Lots of originality...
Love the style and
the concept...

Great Read!

 

[$$RICH$$]

very smooth scribing sweet pen u rollin wit

 

[watzinaname]

You brought the reader into a scene, this flowed very naturally, I'd like to read more form you.

 

[$$RICH$$]

uppin dis again ......tyte write