Black Poetry : My Goatee (The re-mix)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Jan 11, 2005.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Will U braid my goatee?
    Slowly intertwine the strands of hair
    as we stand there in close proximity.
    Let your hands prepare a plait that will solidify my identity.
    Strengthen my individuality.
    2 some, the appearance may ne deeper than the mean,
    but that act can evoke intimacy.
    Sort of like massaging feet or receiving sweets on Valentine's Day.
    So I reiterate...
    Will U braid my goatee?

    Hold 3 groups in your fingers as U get 2 know me.
    Controlling the positioning of my face 2 create a straight pony's tail.
    Make the composed me fail 2 remain composed as I gaze into your eyes
    and recognize U as my soul's queen.
    And how U are the physical embodiment of the succubus
    that seduces me in my untold dreams.
    Just 2 have U standing in my cipher sends my mind floating.
    Withholding nothing from the imagined so I imagine my hands
    exposing your beautifully exquisite molding.
    But I promise 2 behave if you'd braid my goatee.

    Invoking the ancient spirits of the pharoahs of Kmt
    who had theirs braided by their own teams of beauticians 4 consulting.+
    Knowing that by your power, U have imbued in me the strength
    of centuries of Alkebulan dynasties.
    I'm a King who needs his personification personalized cuz I
    wanna be known as the one & only.
    Don't wanna be confused with anyone else, so I do my own thing
    in the form of my chin's hair growing with no other facial hair showing.
    2 have the clones of society scoping empowers the yearning
    2 have it extend below my heart's regional zoning.
    And with the length, increases the hoping that you'd braid my goatee.

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i bet she say yes !
    this was tyte creativity
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This brings to mind the first one. Such a sensual, earthy feel this piece emanates. Flow on brotha, you've been missed.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

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    co mere.....

    I braid your goatee
    Slide my hands through the strands
    Define your identity
    Message the essence of you
    I will braid your goatee

    Gaze into my eyes
    Recognize your dreams
    As your soul begins to scream
    I am the physical embodiment
    Of the succubus, that seduces you
    Moreover, unfold the truth
    Yes, I will braid your goatee


    I like ya remix yanno…:wink:

    nice to see you around more too... :kiss:
     
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