Black Poetry : My Girl

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LeRoy, Jan 11, 2004.

  1. LeRoy

    LeRoy Active Member MEMBER

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    My Girl
    I have thoughts that haunt me.
    I’m missing that female that I want.
    What she’s got will not measure to what society says she ought to be.
    She’ll lift me when I’m drifting into darkness.
    She’ll be the beacon which will always guide me,
    Leading me alone to a place where only she can find me.
    Binding me with her essence and strengthening me with her presence,
    I will always view her as life’s supreme present.
    My Queen, my love, my friend.
    She is the woman I will spend all of time with.
    And when she begins to drift, I will uplift her and stay with her
    until she smiles.
    For when this happens, all my efforts will have been worthwhile.
    Have you ever seen a soul shine through a smile,
    With a light so bright and so pure that it could write a story that’s already been told?
    The Bible holds these stories of angels coming to Earth.
    There are no other truths told like these in the World.
    My girl is an angel because she represents all that I think is good.
    No adulteress could ever tempt me to hurt her
    And no trouble could ever make me desert her.
    If ever there were a person so special to me,
    She would undoubtedly be my Queen amongst queens.
    My feelings for this being brings my souls light out of hiding.
    There’s no way of proclaiming my ultimate love for her.
    I have to take our union to another level,
    I know she feels this way too.
    Through her caring eyes I view something missing.
    A question she’s been listening for.
    So after a night of romance,
    I kneel onto the floor and ask:
    My Queen, my love, my friend,
    Will you marry me?
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice idyllic drop!

    Oh young love...ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Stay as romantic as you
    are and you might just make a decent husband one day!
    Liked this scribe and this vibe!

    Blessings on your House! :wink:
     
  3. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice work on the scribe my brother.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well pose'd da flow of da gurl was of da hook !!!
    flow on Leroy
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so romantically put and sweet, very nice.
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww i love this because i recodnise somethings some one said to me..




    beautifull ...




    keep writting Poet.

    :jumping: FAME !!!!!!!!! i,m gonna live forever

    i,m gonna learn how to fly HIGH :jumping:






    Love L
     
  7. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...

    how sweet is that? ur sumthin special. wish u well...
     
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    very specail flow
    nice oh so nice
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh this was so sweet
    very well posed...
    Angel
     
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