Black Poetry : My Girl: WISDOM

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Jun 2, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whirlwind was the way I can describe the way you swept through my life, so
    Intent on making sure I eloped with you and became one with you. You
    Seduced me deeply, taking me places I've never been. You were my day and
    D usk and I could not complete my life without the addition of your presence.
    O riginally I tried to deal with situations purely from my logical sense. I soon
    M ade a fool of myself, but with you its different. With you I'm complete.


    ~Copyright
    The Year of the Monkey (2004).
    The 93rd year, 4th month, 15th day
    ~*PropheticNsyght
     
  2. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PropheticNsyght,
    Very creative, tasteful and true......
    enjoyed the artistry of it.....

    Write on.....
    Peace and Blessings
     
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    nice piece nsyght....
    your proses remind me of earthy allure...tyte...
    one thing...
    i see that you have 5 pieces on the front page...
    please adhere to the poetic ettiquette
    4 poems on the front page should be the max...
    again...tyte scribe...wisdom is my gurl too ;)
    one love
    khasm
     
  4. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love and appreciation Rasheed. Thanks Bruh.
     
  5. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate the love Khasm13 and I'll be sure to check out the ettiquette. You know it is when you get inspiration. *smiles*
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a wonderful piece and welcome to the set. thanks for sharing your wisdom with us.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems as though the soul has met it's soulmate. Deeply posed and felt.
     
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    well stated...wisdom is just that...a soul mating

    Love the way you crafted this work of art!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen, Watz, and Angelic. I want to thank you so much for your love and affection. God bless you all.
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: Heeey! Now YOU KNOW I like this...Wisdom Is My Sister...So You Like Her Huh?
     
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