Black Poetry : my gift

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    -My Gift-

    Millennium 2


    God’s gift to me—
    Is this written word
    These speeches I leak—
    From the depths of my soul
    From between my teeth—
    And in the pits of my
    Slanted eyes—
    What circles in between my skull
    And nappy *** hair—
    Kinked up and layed down—
    Just like the words I write—

    My gift to you—
    Is my soul on paper—
    Etched in ink—
    To whoever listens—
    My doctorate thesis on—
    Hardpressed times and shitty days—
    Lonely, cold, hungry nights—
    The simple essence of me—
    Which I am nothing without—

    Your gift to me
    Enabling me to talk to y’all
    This written word speaks—
    Keeps you attentively awake in
    Animation yet suspended in my page—
    Between similies.

    Thank y’all


    The espee
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEANY...

    this peace was sweet!!... literally & figuritively...

    you are more than welcome & i am more than happy to
    be a part of your gift & to share mine with you!! :)

    AlwaysLove...
    SunShyne~
     
  3. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Truly

    your written word is a gift from God!!

    continue to bless us with your scribes!:)
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri-and Sunshyne

    i thanks ya!

    sean.
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sean

    you give good gift on the real.



    One
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop , what a gift
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perfect Poet
    I really like this drop
     
  8. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling the flow on this one flow on poet.
     
  9. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice ....



    yes youre gift given to us...:grouphug:


    and keep sharing youre gift....



    beautifull....









    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  10. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the poet sean,

    this just rolls off the toungue...nicely done
     
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