Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Gift- (Check This Out!)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sugarbaby08, Dec 9, 2004.

  1. sugarbaby08

    sugarbaby08 New Member MEMBER

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    You have my attention without one word mentioned
    I invision...
    Us in only ways my mental may position you next to me
    Imagine we...
    The pedigree of some kind of royalty,
    the way you're meant to be,
    A king...
    I'd give anything to have your light near me,
    so that I may be the envy
    Of brilliant stars and wanna-bes that span the course of our universe
    You're too precious to subject to conventional speaking
    so I softly communicate my love in verses.
    Your hold on me like hypnosis with doses of unspoken commands
    To keep my focus on the task at hand..
    Which is pleasing you.
    My mind's eye
    fixed on the curves of your beautiful mind empowers me to do things that no woman could...
    Like wipe the world free of hate, sadness and tyranny
    so that it may be pure for us.
    If obtaining this "high" claims my life,
    I'd rise from the grave like Lazurus,
    for dangerous is my soul in heaven or hell,
    if left unchecked by your spell..
    I dwell...
    In the faithful gaze in your eyes
    is this unconditional love I have.
    Claim your treasure
    without any measure
    I'll see it through baby
    My Gift To You.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flow here sugarbaby08
    you let it roll sweetly in a gift......
     
  3. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this piece flowed like water and was a beautiful scribe. keep inkin' em.

    Lyr1c
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    what a wonderful poetic gift you give...
    keep flowing...
     
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