Black Poetry : MY GIFT 2 U

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by seduction29, Dec 14, 2003.

  1. seduction29

    seduction29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MY GIFT 2 U

    DON'T KEEP ME LOCKED UP HERE
    BECAUSE I'M MEANT 2 BE FREE
    YOU CAN PUSH ME INTO THE CORNERS OF YOUR MIND ALL U WANT 2
    I'LL STILL SUCCEED
    KEEP FIGHTING THOSE TEARS BACK
    CAUSE IT GIVES ME POWER WHEN U LACK THAT
    I KNOW ALL YOUR SECRETS AND YOUR LITTLE LIES
    IT'S ME WHO LIFTS U UP WHEN YOUR UPSET
    AND YOUR SOUL SLIDES DOWN 2 DIE
    THE ONE THAT U SHARE YOUR BED WITH
    WHEN THEY LIE NEXT 2 U
    THEY HAVE NO IDEA THAT IT'S ME ON YOUR MIND
    THEY NEVER HAD A CLUE
    BUT I DO..
    U THINK I'M FUN BECAUSE U CAN ROLE PLAY WITH ME
    BUT I KNOW THE ROLE PLAY GOES DEEPER
    IT'S NOT ROLE PLAY AT ALL IS IT
    WHAT YOU CALL PRETEND IS TRUE
    I WON'T TELL I'LL KEEP YOUR SECRET
    I KNOW ALL YOU'VE BEEN THROUGH
    KEEP YOUR FACE ON SO OTHERS WON'T SEE IT
    THEN COME TO ME
    DON'T SPEAK THOUGH
    I ALREADY KNOW
    I LOVE WHEN I BRING U THAT JOY
    WHEN WE'RE 2 GETHER FEEL FREE
    TO USE ME AS YOUR PLAY TOY
    I AM THE OPEN WINDOW 2 YOUR FUTURE
    YOUR MENTAL SICKNESS NEEDS NO MEDICINE
    I AM YOUR CURE
    IF YOU COULD YOU WOULD TOTE ME EVERYWHERE
    SOMETIMES YOU DO
    IN YOUR POCKET
    ON A DISK
    ON A RECORDER
    IN A TORN NOTEBOOK THAT BRINGS A WRITER
    A PROUD SHEER BLISS
    I'LL BRING U WHAT U NEED
    EVERYDAY ALL WEEK
    DO NOT UNDERESTIMATE
    OR FORGET ME
    I AM YOUR POETRY.......

    COPYWRITTEN 2003
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What's up cuz, glad 2 see U came thru.

    This was a very nice mind ripening intro.

    Poetry definitely brings joy, speaks your pains, & anything else that you're afraid of speaking of in the open.

    Niice.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel this..nice write....
    :wave:welcome once more...
    likes da read..:angel1:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey :wave: Welcome to the family
    of love and embrace
    i enjoy your collab
    and this flow is
    wonderful
    very nice
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' yes indeed u are poetry as poetry is u
    tyte drop on da real
     
  6. seduction29

    seduction29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'M GLAD YOU ALL LIKED TO FLOW. I KNOW YOU CAN RELATE. I'M LEARNING A LOT FROM U ALL. PLEASE CONTINUE READIN AND GIVING ME ADVICE WHERE IT IS NEEDED OR SUGGESTIONS. THERE IS ALWAYS ROOM TO GROW AND IMPROVE. SHOUT OUT TO MY COUSIN PM..LUV PEACE AND HAIR GREASE..LOL...29
     
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    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: TO seduction29



    Seduction29, wrote masterpiece!
    Someone call me a justice of the peace
    Because this Poet writes from the heart
    Did a lovely Female write this work of Art???

    Twisted and Turned kept Alpha in suspense
    Right up to the very last great sequence
    Who'd thought that we were such close intimates
    Poet's poetry secret lovers private
     
  8. seduction29

    seduction29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ALL FEMALE

    YES IT WAS A LOVELY FEMALE THAT WROTE THIS PIECE
    IM FLATTERED YOU THINK IT IS A MASTERPIECE
    YOU HAVE A WAY WITH YOUR WORDS ALSO
    I LOOK FORWARD TO READING A LOT MORE FROM YOU ALPHA
    KEEP LOOKIN OUT FOR ME ALSO, THERE IS MORE TO COME..29
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl....this is so hot...

    I'm truly speechless...

    you are truly making an entrance...

    (Rolling out the Red Carpet).... :jumping:
     
  10. seduction29

    seduction29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ANGELIC SAGE

    THANKYOU ANGELIC SAGE I AM ENJOYING THIS SITE VERY MUCH..THE FACT THAT YOU LIKE MY STUFF IS AN HONOR B CUZ YOUR FLOW IS ......THERE R NO WORDS...JUST KNOW THAT I AM LEARNING A LOT FROM YOU...AND I LIKE IT A LOT....THANKS FOR THE LOVE TRULY..29
     
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