Black Poetry : my first

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’m completely dazed as that familiar hazel gaze draws near,
    then that honey glazed frame that encloses your smile, suddenly disappears.
    Although no longer in sight, my vision could never be as clear,
    as when I’m holding you tight with an ever so slight touch on the back of your ear.
    Preliminary fears are pushed to the rear and replaced with anticipation.
    Then with the right sense of patience,
    I’ll let her rock to the cadence of our hearts intensification.
    As intense and amazing as flesh unification could ever be expressed within verse
    its hard to rehearse quenching a primitive thirst, especially when it’s the first.
    Consumed by emotion but enthraled in the notion of taking it just a bit further,
    so now as I hold her, I mentally mold her with encouraging words to console her
    With such a beautiful merger, I feel compelled to submerge her in a sea of unparalleled bliss, by planting a kiss in every place that she’d wish,
    without miss to make sure that she’d never forgets this.
    Causing constant euphoria using my tongue to explore her undefiled corridor,
    as her body dances to the tune of complete satisfaction.
    So of course my reaction at the apex of the passion,
    is to fashion a course to the source of her warmth,
    and right before penetration, our hearts are adjacent, and our minds are syncing as one.
    As our rhythm begins to flow in a natural trend, and story of we is revealed,
    a feeling instilled within the depths of my will, tells me that this merger is real
    Although no longer present, I use this lesson as a message to always nourish my thirst, and never take for granted the love that I’m handed and to always treasure my first.


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    © Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop i see u love it here again welcome
    share some of that great energy and drop some love
    to these great poet's here ...................................!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice scribe...nice to read you as well hear you on the mic.....
    Angel
     
  4. angelicsage

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    Wow...that was beautiful.
    What can I say that I haven't already said
    or rather yelled in my oversized text replies...lol
    Poet...u already know

    *Applause*

    Loving your work!
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop poet and Welcome to the family. :yo:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brought like a fresh spring shower, this felt refreshing and real. Truly enjoying your flows brotha.