Black Poetry : My First

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by renee31127, Sep 9, 2003.

  1. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 25, 2003
    Messages:
    244
    Likes Received:
    2
    Occupation:
    Pre School Teacher
    Location:
    Baltimore, MD
    Ratings:
    +2
    You were the first
    And still maybe the most special
    You took me as I was
    Made me love the way you held my hand
    Or draped your arm around my sholder
    To let everyone know I was your'es
    You were just as proud to have me beside you if I was wearing slippers or heels
    With you I felt things I had never felt before
    In your arms is where I wanted to stay
    But like all good things they must come to an end
    Or maybe it doesn't
    Cause you'll always be my first
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 27, 2003
    Messages:
    1,115
    Likes Received:
    4
    Location:
    Fayetteville, NC
    Ratings:
    +4
    girl...i wish my first was like this! LOL good flow. i loved it.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    the first always remembered
    this was tyte flowin give us mo !
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    always remind on your
    mind no matter
    who your with
    or where your at...
    its always there...
    i like this alot
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 8, 2003
    Messages:
    2,752
    Likes Received:
    28
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Educational/Human Resources field
    Location:
    Chicago, IL
    Ratings:
    +28
    :) this is so beautiful:)
     
  6. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2001
    Messages:
    2,053
    Likes Received:
    13
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Teacher of English, Literature & Poetry
    Location:
    Baltimore, Md.
    Ratings:
    +15
    the first is always the one whom never leaves your heart and yet can never be replaced...

    this is a wonderful scribe...

    one.
     
  7. POETIC RAPTURE

    POETIC RAPTURE Active Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Sep 8, 2003
    Messages:
    26
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    I remembered my first when I read this. Although he wasn't my best relationship, he was the most special. And no one can ever replace what he is to me or what he taught me. I loved this, you left me wanting more.