Quiet Poetry Lounge : My First True Waterfall

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My First True Waterfall

    Innocent, deepest sexuality untouched,
    shutin unable to release it wonder.
    Like a scream closed in a bottle left
    to rattle its prison, my body.
    I open my mouth for years longing to moan,
    but silence is all the is released.
    You have taken the bottle into your hands,
    caressed and warmed it, arousing emotions I've never felt.
    Whrispers so luminous and penetrateing,
    educed my need to verbralize my pleasure.
    Your touch sents a rhythm of overwhelming music
    which intensifies the heat, igniting my climax.
    I throw back my head and a melody of song flows
    from my mouth and silence is no more, a symphony of passion
    sounds out to the wind, this is estacy I am in
    You've opened the doors to my sexual desires.
    Finally, I've experienced the most optimum orgasm EVER!
    :spin: :jumping: :spinstar:

    copyright2000
     
  2. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CONGRATS

    Nice one Coco.......i really felt you on this.
    This man just wants to congratulate that woman........ for the expression and the explosion.
    peace
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AOO7

    Thank you for the read:heart: Coco
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DID I DO THAT!!

    UNTOUCHED
    LOVED
    THE LONE 2 MOAN
    SILENT SCREAMS
    LOVIN
    MY HEART
    YO SOUL
    OUR BODIES
    AND IN THE ESSENCE OF IT ALL:D
    SO I FINALLY BROKE THROUGH:lol:
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your title drew me

    and I am smiling :)

    thank you for this


    a
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YEAH! $$RICH$$

    See wha'cha done did? I'm DRENCHED!;)
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Anytime Alyce

    You're Welcome. I was smiling when, while and after writing this. Gurl! The imagination is a powerful thang.:D
     
  8. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey now, Hey now!

    All I can say gurl, Is let if Flow!
    Great piece!
    Jyntl
     
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