Black Poetry : My first posting-Title:I Do

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  1. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Do


    Alluring is befitting of an anomaly that occurs only in my mind…but

    my mind is fertile for the seed you’ve planted…I grow it with the

    uncertain certainty of reaping more than some physical contact…I

    grow it in hopes of reaping something so incredible that love has

    no name for it…something so pleasant and worth while that time

    stands in awe of its power, that envy and jealousy kill each other

    just to gain the approval of what we together share…laughter

    weeps at the simplistic beauty of seamless majestry in motion. I

    now live to receive your gift of you-ness in the realm of free…free

    like the breeze blowing softly through my thoughts while gently

    flowing to places not known and never shown. I could never own

    you…I could only hope to be touched by you in an act of total

    innocence. Is possession an obsession that rewards the caged or

    the cager? Does it give pleasure or support emotional masochistic

    beliefs, sprouted by a one sided non existent move of a non

    traditional approach at a supremely regulated love? I awkwardly

    try to hide behind a myriad boastful rantings orchestrated by

    child-like goings on that are washed away by kisses held close to

    my core. Finally the rains come and the seed is nourished…finally

    the seed grows… finally the seed is nourished and grows

    Strong…
    Deep…
    Stronger…
    Deeper…
    Do
    You
    Feel
    Me? Finally.
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem is madddd deep!!! I feel you for sho!!!
    I can feel da beauty thriving in me!!!

    And by the way,

    Welcome to Destee's!!!

    :wave: :wave: :party: :kiss: :star: :rolling: :star: :kiss: :party: :wave: :wave:

    D's is the place to be!!!
    Welcome to the family!!

    I have the feeling you're gonna be a big name around here!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  3. bahati

    bahati Active Member MEMBER

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    whoaaaaaaaaa, that's something very extraordinary - you don't come across something so brilliant every day. definitely love your style. will there be more? hopefully!!!
     
  4. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NIIIIIIIIIICE!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground of love
    welcome from above welcome to the family of bond
    welcome dis tyte flow u scribe ....happy to have u upon us
    u kin now continue to flow:) :wave: :rolling: :wave:
     
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    emprezz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you and welcome. Very nice and well received. Get yo flow on !!

    Peace & Blessings!!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow poet!!!! Wecome to Destees!!!!
    :wave:
     
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    Welcome to Destee...and yes "I Do", the seed you plant on this page I water in hopes of reaping more scibes such as this. Your flow is strong and deep and yes we feel you...I predict your flow will become quite "Quintessential" around here!

    Again Welcome!
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very tyte flow....look forward to more...:)
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wooooooooooooahhhhhhh, mad deep cuz, tyte flo', maybe much more. Welcome to Destee.
     
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