Black Poetry : MY FIRST POST (Hard Life)

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  1. jamaicanbway

    jamaicanbway New Member MEMBER

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    In many ways, I await the days
    Of me not being on earth.
    I have to say, It shouldnt be this way
    But its been like that since birth.
    See, Life's been hard, like climbing a grease tree
    You climb up, then slip back down
    Its hard to see?
    How can it be?
    Well...you just gotta be me.

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee's poetic playground of love
    i've been on the wet mask of un justice
    i've seen the darken fall upon me
    i know dis all so well it's like a spell
    up & down spin yet i welcome you upon family & friendz
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey how are you doing welcome. I want you to know that your first flow was a good one. Keep up the good work
     
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    Your words have the power to change lives-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    j'way...the playground is bustling with excitement...at your entrance. WELCOME. as Destee would say, "...sit a while...take your shoes off..." etc....etc...etc.:)

    life is hard for all of us
    we walk through pains
    we quiver in lust
    we scratch and scrape and go to bed at night
    when dawn comes around
    we continue the fight
    of life.

    THAT'S WHAT WE DO

    let the river flow.
     
  6. SayinWhatUCant

    SayinWhatUCant Active Member MEMBER

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    Hey welcome.....I share your pain from birth until this minute. The pain was so great that I had to run. I ran for 10+ years. Experienced everything that should have been taught alone. all i wanted was some compassion, some LOVE that i have craved and desired for so long...I used to scream 'DAM* GIVE ME SOMETHING!!! no more!!!!! Im giving it to myself ..... Stay strong sista...... Don't let the demons win............
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ONE LOVE, JAH LOVE!

    IT ALL KNOWLEDGE JOY+PAIN=POWERFUL GAIN
    USE THAT TO OVER COME AND TO EMPOWER YOUR SISTER AND BROTHER THAT FEEL THEY HAVE NO VOICE...Cause you do!
    Welcome , Welcome, Welcome!
    Sorry I missed your debut, but I will go back to read your earlier posts and comment.

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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