Black Poetry : MY FIRST ORGASM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by reggaediva, Feb 4, 2004.

  1. reggaediva

    reggaediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wasn't a virgin I had done this before,
    Maybe not with the same man,
    I was 18 and he was 24;
    So does that make a whore.
    We weren't serious this was just a thing,
    You know one of them "after da club" kinda fling.

    We were in his barracks room watching midnight love,
    Then he started kissing all the right places;
    And ladies, you know how we throw our heads up and start looking at whats above.
    Now at this point we were coming out of our clothes,
    I thought to myself he talk all that **** he better not be sorry,
    Well hell that's why I'm glad I drove.
    Now at this point brother is doing the **** thing,
    LL Cool J's DOIN IT is what I wanted to sing.
    I was all into it, brother had me grabbin all on his bed,
    **** I feel like I'm bout to melt.
    Yo word, it felt like I just peed in his bed.
    Next thing I know he's flipping me over and starts giving me head.

    He comes back up; and whispers in my ears;
    "You taste so sweet, I haven't had it like this in years!"
    By this time I can't even move,
    I'm only 18, nobody ever told me about this kinda groove.
    I rubbed my hands across the sheet, Hoping that it wasn't pee.
    He's looking at it too, Then smiles and say;
    You got yours I see!!.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now eroticly ......
    i see
     
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    wow...painting the canvas:hot:
    Welcome to the family :wave:
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Re: TO reggaediva

    I loved your poem and it really was a poem
    It as if i was there
    Great job
     
  5. MsBashay

    MsBashay New Member MEMBER

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    girl now you know you need to stop.. girl I had to show this to some of my friends . and they all were tickled pink. you know "white people". you got to give me some more of that....


    :spinstar:
     
  6. caramelpython

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    Spicy flow.... Loved it all.... hope it was not your last..LOL :grin:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice...just flow on....
    its already been said....
    eroticly....agree
    painting the canvas..agree
    Spicy flow.....agree
    this was cool in otherwards....lol
     
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