Black Poetry : My First One....Love Is

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sonnee01, Aug 31, 2005.

  1. sonnee01

    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVE IS….
    AN
    UNCANNY THANG
    IT HAS U ACTING KINDA
    STRANGE…
    JUST TO WAKE UP
    AND DO IT AGAIN….
    MANN… I TELL U
    THIS DUDE GOT
    MY HEAD ON
    COMPLETE SPINN
    I DON’T KNOW HOW
    TO COME UP OUT OF THIS MAZE
    BUT UNTIL I DO
    I’M JUS GON RIDE THIS
    WAVE
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like feeling the bliss of ya heart
    ride on ......
     
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    Nothin wrong w/spiinnin and ridin! Nicely done.
     
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    Just enjoy that trip poet. This made me smile.
     
  5. sonnee01

    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Y'all

    Hey.... Rich, Widsom7 & Watzinaname... this was my very first time writing poetry... glad I did alright, now y'all got dem wheels turning :) Thanks!!!
     
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    I liked this poem...it was calm and refreshing....

    keep the flow goin

    Word from Mz.Soull
    aka prizefighter16
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    RIDE ON PLAYA RIDE ON

    DSS
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to the club, we all, at one time or another have to swin through waves of life...just enjoy it and swim on.
    nice drop poet...keep penning them, it cleanses the soul.
     
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    anAfrican Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tis a totally delicious spin! and that "being in love spin" is pretty awesome too!

    outta da closet; Bring Em!
     
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    peace sonnee01,

    this is a tyte piece........

    & when your head stops spinnin you will realize he's not worth a glass of MILK or a plate of COOKIES when compared to what you are worth........
     
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