Black Poetry : My First Lover

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  1. felicity

    felicity Member MEMBER

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    In my mind you are still my lover
    so i can't move on to another.
    My first thought was to be mad
    but i ended up sad.

    When i needed you so
    you decided to go.
    So without a word
    your footsteps i heard.

    What i thought was reality
    turned out to be a fallacy
    Never would i have thought
    the love i sought
    would just up and leave
    nothing left to retrieve.

    My heart tells me to wait longer
    my mind says to get sober
    for the love that made me drunk
    has been shoved in a trunk.

    Gone away with a tide
    in a dark place to hide.
    This love that left me sore
    i will see never more

    Its a hard thing to learn
    that the one thing you yearn
    can up and disappear
    now I'm filled with fear.

    Will I find another love?
    Will we soar up above?
    Oh what a day,
    when I'll be able to say

    That I moved on to another
    cause I learned from my first lover.
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good poem.......ouch, i feel the pain.........1st loves, grrrr :)
     
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    the way you learned,
    is no simple task.
    why did he go,
    is the question you asked.
    he left you,
    so that you could be free.
    he opened your eyes,
    so that you could see.
    if he wouldn't have left,
    you would be tangled in his love.
    even though you have another person,
    he know that it's him your thinking of..........(tight flow-keep it real)
     
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    I can relate to that. I was there. I,m at the end of it now. Thanks
    I dont feel so alone now
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaaay Felicity :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    This is a very nice peace! Thank you for joining us and sharing it. I bet it would be nice to hear you speak it on the mic ?? ... :wink: ... we do have a mic ... www.************ ...

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm with sarcasm on this one....I feel the pain.....sh** stinks don't it?
     
  7. felicity

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    thanks for the support...i found writing was a positive outlet for expressing my feelings...and i enjoy every minute of it....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice vibe on da first love wooooweeeee!
    i felt ya here
    come join us tonight cross da mic
    open flow speak u know
    here on destee at www.************
     
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