Black Poetry : My First Lovely High

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by krazelyricks, Aug 14, 2004.

  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2003
    Messages:
    1,424
    Likes Received:
    12
    Occupation:
    student
    Location:
    da south............ATL
    Ratings:
    +12
    Smoke graced my tempos
    From my mouth to yo's
    Made my body shake
    Before I could take
    another breath or make
    my hand shake
    From this thing I knew to be so bad
    Because this feeling was making me feel so glad
    It was my first lovely high

    My hands extended for this blunt like structure
    And the smoke directed itself INSIDE my body's virtue
    Moving in and out violently and discretely destroying my figure
    Posing words and sentences that I've only heard in literature
    How could a small yet dark brown like creature
    Make my body feel so high in nature
    and nurture
    my body with a tempo like a child's literature
    only MATURE

    The blunt stretched deep inside of me
    So deep I forgot who I be
    It was my first time and it was so unique to see
    How something so small could please me so heavenly
    Made me scream and shout so vibrantly
    Yet also made me feel a feeling so nicely

    As the smoke disappeared I took in more and more
    I moved this party from the bed to the floor
    Crazy........that's me..........I felt as if I could soar
    I screamed," MORE......baby.......MORE!!!!!!!!!!!"
    The smoking blunt was hitting my high right in the coar

    My body was wet
    When this blunt and my lips met
    It was as if the blunt was making me his pet
    And it's funny because this is something I let
    It wasn't hard to accept
    It was only a mystery why I felt this high............and this blunt like structure was the suspect
    Bracing my body and having a higher effect

    Higher and higher
    The blunt penetrated my deepened layers
    Blocking and tackling like football players
    The blunt and my lips took on it's own manner
    Shooting my body with the tip of it's trigger
    The blunt was my body's defeater

    After about 2 hours
    The blunt had no more smoke to pour
    After that high I've never forgotten those hours
    Sweat on my body and a blunt to follow
    Smoke on my pillow
    And that blunt deep in my dark hollow

    :smokin: :yo: :smokin: :yo: :smokin: :yo:
     
  2. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2003
    Messages:
    1,424
    Likes Received:
    12
    Occupation:
    student
    Location:
    da south............ATL
    Ratings:
    +12
    I posted this one before but I can't seem to get to it when I tried. So I said shoot, I'll just post it again. That's just more post to the board. :yo:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    tyte smoking flow sho ya right !
     
  4. Blackheart

    Blackheart New Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 13, 2004
    Messages:
    2
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    OOh My Gosh that was amazing,I am speechless :jawdrop:
     
  5. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2003
    Messages:
    1,424
    Likes Received:
    12
    Occupation:
    student
    Location:
    da south............ATL
    Ratings:
    +12
    Thanks rich and blackheart. I'm glad ya liked it.
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 30, 2003
    Messages:
    5,322
    Likes Received:
    38
    Location:
    ~The hidden library...~
    Ratings:
    +39
    Girl...I see you haven't
    last your flavor for
    starting fires with
    clever metaphorical flows...

    :hot: Flow on girl!
     
  7. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 28, 2004
    Messages:
    787
    Likes Received:
    7
    Ratings:
    +7
    Diggin those vibes!
     
  8. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jun 4, 2003
    Messages:
    2,845
    Likes Received:
    36
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    nyc
    Ratings:
    +43
    Yeah...
    i liked this...
    it was a joint
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2003
    Messages:
    1,424
    Likes Received:
    12
    Occupation:
    student
    Location:
    da south............ATL
    Ratings:
    +12
    Thanks fam for feeling my flow again. It was greatly appreciated.
     
  10. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 30, 2004
    Messages:
    374
    Likes Received:
    9
    Occupation:
    Stress Management Therapist
    Location:
    Akasha
    Ratings:
    +9
    i likes...i likes
    this was a metaphorical rollercoaster ride that was :smokin:

    i really enjoyed readin' this
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - Lovely High
  1. Liberty
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    172
  2. Perfection
    Replies:
    2
    Views:
    199
  3. Kemetstry

    Black Entertainment : DARK N LOVELY

    Replies:
    1
    Views:
    561
  4. CosmicMessenger
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    393
  5. cherryblossom
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    294