Black Haiku : My first Haiku

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  1. BlaqButterfly

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    Caressing my mind
    While staring deep in my eyes
    You're making me high
     
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    VERY WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!! You mos def in it lee captured the euphoric sensation of being captured and held suspended in the most hypnotic pair of eyes you've ever seen. Very erotic stuff heah!

    Keep it coming!

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    beautifully said
    the eyes of love within u
    looking through da glass
     
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    This I love very much. You first haiku? You write like a pro!
     
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    poetically
    one's heart into perfection
    da pen flowin sweet
     
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