Black Haiku : My first haiku

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  1. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    was born a tomboy
    evolved into a woman
    i still love football
     
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    VERY COOL SWEET!!!!
    FIRST HAIKU WAS REALLY COOL


    CON-:congrats: GRAT:congrats: ULA:congrats: TIONZ!!!!!!!!
    :10900:
     
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    She used to climb trees
    With each step she takes today
    She ascends higher

    Great haiku Sweet baby_face!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Each day past by u
    womanly from the days gone
    football still o-kay
     
  5. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks so much.
    I never wrote a haiku before,
    so I decided to try it.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AWW, Thanks!!!!
    :spin: :spin: :spin:
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Of course, football is good.
    Especially college football.
    Still hoping, wishing, and dreaming for a playoff.
     
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    I am a women
    I still enjoys the boy toys
    Tomboy natural
     
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    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Football's a passion
    Since the tender age of ten
    Im still tomboyish

    Lovin your haiku
    Keep that passion flowing, love
    to hear more from you :)

    :heart: Much much love :hearts2:
     
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    hung with the fellas,
    now...evenin' gowns and make-up-
    facets of my soul


    great haiku love.
     
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