Black Poetry : my first destee poem (1 poet sought inspired)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sha'iyn, Feb 4, 2008.

  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the first pyramid

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    we need somewhere for prayin', stayin', learnin'
    livin', givin', earnin'
    a CENTRAL FIRE burnin'
    balancing all while this world's turnin'
    secrets keep it standin'
    the most high is plannin' another building
    another child among children
    sealed in his tomb Tut, Imhotep, Cheops
    Zoser and Piankhy behind limestone blocks
    herbs, oils and powders so they won't quickly rot
    true chemists indeed in case we all forgot
    hidden chambers, past peace, present anger
    the more you dig the more you find... DANGER!
    Yashua left his manger and came here to Afriqa
    you do a little research and now they're after ya
    Imma tell my baba if you bother my home
    My uma let you in you must now begone
    Imma be strong and keep on keeping on
    and keep On in my ohms from Enuma to Psalms
    closed and open palms bended and straight knee
    I pray to thee everyday you see
    tornados tear down houses in suburbia well
    where i dwell nothing fell eventhough it's hell
    heaven is in the mental so, thank god for the scribes with pencils
    the tribes i been through only led back yonder
    to a place where the same race wanders
    9th wonder -Sha'iyn

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    Last edited by Sha'iyn : 05-22-2007 at 01:05 PM

    thanks 1 poet sought for your inspiration and constant feedback
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sha'iyn]
    It is indeed wonderful
    How we can become inpsire by others
    This flow you have shared with US

    Shows me just that.
    With all the craziness going around US
    We need to be up on key..and sharpen
    our wicks.. and take the time
    to learn . Wonderful research..Your flow
    have so many Avenues, and that's whats
    make it good to me.
    Very awesome write
    Peace~N~Love
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So very nice.

    The mental can make heaven from a hell if U have peace of mind.

    Urs is protected by the power that be, unseen.

    Bless.
     
  4. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great piece and this was your first post on destee? Unbelievable! So very well conveyed! I'm really feeling it!!!!
     
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    Right all by itself...


    It stands on it's own as an authentic work of art.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done to be yo first .....
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes my brethren

    time is close for the chains of control to shatter
     
  8. queentswana

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    Great piece poet... thanks for sharing
     
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