Black Poetry : My First date

beautifulblkw

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sitting on the step patiently
watching the cars go by
dreaming of him wishing he was already here
the smile on my face
is one that cant be replaced
listening to the children sing the song that's in my heart
wondering how much longer we will be apart
the only problem is i don't know who he is
tall short
light or dark
...It really don't matter long as he plays the part
will he sing the song of peace and discovery as i
will he hold my hand hug me and cry
will he whisk me way
telling this world goodbye
is that him i think i'm ma died
help me out please what should i say
i think he's coming
i hope it's to stay
ok ok I know what to do
i got this, I'm sure of it to



wow he's just how i pictured him
handsome as ever
but full of sin
no longer excited
feeling very unsure
it's really ashame i don't want him around anymore
he held my hand i started to cry
he whisked me way i wanted to died
he sung a song of his sorrow and pain
said mine was fine cause i've always live this way
he said i'm your friend believe in me boo
but i got a new family I gotta do what i gotta do
a harass reality but so very true
the day i met my dad and lost him to !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:em18:

 

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o'my my i truely can relate to this for i too walked this path and know it so well
 

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sad true

we all feel your pain

trust me

your version is one too many

on why it's like that but sadly that's the way it is

for some reason
 

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A heartfelt piece...

I wasn't expecting that ending. Sadly there is that 'little girl' inside of many women who share similar sentiment.

We are not responsible for another's actions, but we can try to minimize the impact it has on us. I've decovered writing helps sort out feelings.


feelin'itsouldeep!
Coco:dance:
 

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