Black Poetry : MY FEARS, WANTS AND HOPES.

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  1. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Before i continue, i would like to say a very big thank you to sister Patrice for making this piece what it is.
    I love you.



    my fear, wants and hopes

    love you but you know that
    i do not need to tell,

    my fears are you'll reject me
    and that would be my hell
    i feel so lost and lonely being without you

    I held you tightly
    told you i love you
    the day you asked me to leave
    i didn’t want to go that day
    cause my heart was breaking
    i felt so lost and lonely being without you

    after i left
    then i realized how much you meant to me
    all i know is one day
    i'll be coming back
    you will not have to wait too long
    because i'll come back to you
    and hold you in embrace

    you gave me such a glimmer of hope against my fears
    the things we do together i could never give
    they are ours and ours alone
    never to be shared
    i mean every single word i say
    i would never lie
    because i hold you so close
    deeply in my heart

    i know i cannot love another
    in my present life
    i do not have another heart to give to anyone
    because my heart belongs to you
    to you alone.
    life alone would be a challenge
    i know that to be true,
    but all of life's a challenge
    every long day through

    Ours would be no different this I know
    you are worth the fight and that is what i'll do
    life is what we make it
    with things we choose to do
    life is full of choices you told me long ago
    this is what i choose to do
    because i love you so
    my fears wants and hopes

    Ibrahim
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes brother life is full of choices
    One heart to another is a special bond
    Willing to fight and do whatever
    For what you want well hold unto that my Brother
    Nice Piece Ibrahim
     
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    wow, ibrahim... oh so so beautiful... wow i feel the wanting , the longing, and the desire.... so nice. very very good piece, thanx ibrahim... D.S.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    brutha this was so on point str8 smooth and well expressed
    in da beauty and warmth of a heart........flow on man i love this piece.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There was such an earnest, genuine feel to this piece, just beautiful brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    alright poet of the week !!!!
     
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    Nice, life will always be filled with choices.
     
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    ahhh this was so right on point love the flow ibri flow on poet of the week!!!!!!!!!:spinstar:
     
  9. ibrahim

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    THANK YOU

    WANT TO THANK YOU ALL FOR THE LOVE.
    I LOVE YOU ALL
     
  10. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So true.
    Thx for the love
     
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