Black Poetry : My Favorite Place To Be...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Jan 31, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my favorite place
    to be ~
    inside those eyes
    those beautiful orbs
    of light reflecting
    your years
    of seasoned loving
    aged to perfection
    with time

    my favorite place
    to be ~
    upon those lips
    ~when you call
    my name,
    they smile and
    miraculously
    without
    touching my skin,
    kiss all of me

    my favorite place
    to be ~
    on your mind,
    remembering
    our times
    of absolute joy
    and abject pain
    we’ve shared
    will share
    again/again/again
    &again

    my favorite place
    to be ~
    in your arms
    soaking up the
    rays of light that
    fill you, the heat
    of my being
    thrills you ~
    I feel your body
    sway our rhythm
    naturally, and
    s-l-o-w-l-y
    we rock ‘we’
    (remember, ‘dance with me’?)

    my favorite place
    to be~
    in your heart
    every chamber
    filled with this
    new woman
    I am
    every
    syncopated throb
    beating
    “I-know-we-can”

    my favorite place
    to be ~
    inside your gold-
    spun poetry
    my essence
    coursing through
    your pen
    you ink
    A-L-Y-C-E
    love letters
    that come
    alive when you
    set me free

    my favorite
    place to be~
    beneath/beside/above you/buried deep
    inside of
    me

    Alyce, © 2001
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    wow Alyce !!! Yes Yes Yes !!!

    that's shole the place to be!!

    :)
     
  3. Juicylv4u2

    Juicylv4u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yes, yes!!..I'm feeling you Sistahgurl..where esle is there a better place to be :)
     
  4. cinnq

    cinnq New Member MEMBER

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    Where I want to be

    And my favorite place to be is right here reading this luscious poetry of your's! Wish you'd write me sumthin!
     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nicely

    done Al..very peaceful...very calm.. thankz for allowin me to see the beauty of your words.
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This did have a beautiful serene feel to it, yes.
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    it was a lovely poem....
    thank you for sharing with me
    one new arrival of 2003
     
  8. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HI

    WOW!!!
    THIS IS A NICE FOW!!!!!
    I LIKE IT!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful as ever my sis Alyce.....thankz for sharing
     
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    I love it poet
    This is my first reading of you
    So I will be looking
    Flow on poet
     
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