Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Father

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UbZoRbShUn, Jun 17, 2001.

  1. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Although my biological
    Didn't have tyme for me
    I met you one sunny day
    You held my chin in your hand
    Dried my tears and helped
    Me face my biggest fears

    You never lied to me
    Did all you could
    Gave to me unconditionally
    Helped me spritually
    Mentally
    Never asking for anything
    In return
    I love you with all my
    Heart
    You will always be with me
    Forever plus infinity

    * For all the Father's out there biological or not, you are really appreciated for all you do. Im glad I had someone in my life to step up to the plate. Happy Father's day to the Mom's out there as well*


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  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Zorb~

    Well put sista-gurl!!

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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WORD...

    giving RESPECT where respect is due.

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  4. poeticdelight

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    nice flow

    UbZoRbShUn..

    nice flow

    pd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MAD RESPECT

    TOO U FOR NOTICING
    A REAL TRUE MAN THAT
    FIT THE NAME FATHER.

    THANX U :toast: :love: :heart: :D
     
  6. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey sis!

    Even though I can't relate, I really like this!!!!
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ZorbShun....

    as always my dear sister Queen...
    you are doin' your thang & doin' it well!! :)

    i'm missin' you!!

    AlwaysLove.
    Sunny~
     
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