Black Poetry : MY FAIR LADY (Pt.II)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As i lay her down to fairy sleep
    protecting her soul wit inner keeps
    sheering her heart so it don't weep
    from the massive forbidden bleeps

    She was the Goddess to my foundation
    the cinderalla to my story of affection
    the Queen to my every direction
    my fair lady , this love we pose
    is deep and blooms like da field rose

    As we permit our love in bond
    not into the sinnerster of lust
    but unto da loyality of trust
    softly , gentle and tenderly mild
    we kiss in memories beyond years
    watching the beauty of our love rise

    Eternity is endlessly as my sense floods
    hot and pure not from rapture
    yet thy obligation to mandate our dewelling
    a place where we go and hearts yield
    commitment of emotions greatest density
    one language cannot speak or tell
    of thy fair lady , we part from da fairy tale

    Where myth loom to revisit love's demands
    from these feeling my love is sure , my mind
    no longer wonder and my heart say yes
    see my beloved i knew from the first moment
    that we was at sail to be , i will never leave thee
    i'll celebrate and sing in the helms of ya temple
    at the feet of ya soul and through ya spirit
    your my rain drop and my sunshine of belief

    We found not only love but brother & sister hood
    O' my sweet fair lady, what a beautiful thing
    of man & woman hearts swoon beneath da starz
    of a love's moon cascading on the orbs of ya
    very existance that redefines the means of such
    sweet treasure , golden pleasure ,warmth measures
    we touch not with hands dat's forbidden but from
    the minds of our mentality that lace us in the cares
    of our creator and master we become the crimson tide

    I'll lay down now and watch you from afar
    and leave this exclamation mark upon the stones
    as it's written into civilization and what we become
    our dreams and what we share, I love u again and again.
    :hearts2: :hearts1: :heart: :heart: :heart: :hearts1: :hearts2:


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    $$RICH$$....

    Awwwwww, you did it again. you got me lost in your fairytale fantasy. If I click my heels three times...will I snap out of this? *clicks heels*....:spinstar: :fairy: :spinstar:
    :blush: I enjoyed reading this flow Prince Charming
     
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    aweeee thank u spicybrown
    you make click ya slippers
    as i wave my magical wand
    so that our togetherness not
    depart us but send us into a
    new journey and that u carry
    my love along side ya heart
    to prove it's love.....................
     
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    Rich, man... You got a keen and deep understanding of love.
    bes believe I'm takin' notes. lol
    flo on poet.
    One love
     
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    big thankz skrybble7 but know i too are watching many
    of you all who give me the direction with my affection
    i bring new dementions to compassion ........
     
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    This was even more beautiful than part I. Makes a sista feel like floating on a billowy cloud, with the planets and the stars as the backdrop. Lovely drop.
     
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    Thank you watz it's the place i love to see ya heart float on too.
     
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    your fair lady
    has been known to drive a man crazy

    so get at me Richy Rich!!!!!!!!!
    :smooch:
     
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    you think that's it what da fair lady bring
    that make my heart sing in gleam humm!
    thankz Nevar for that note of enlightment.
     
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    anytime my sunshine.:smooch:
     
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