Black Poetry : MY FAIR LADY (LOVIN)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Through fairy tales of love
    and the reading we accept
    the many times beyond reasons
    lay a deep season of hope

    On every curve of nowhere
    i see a path, a way to move
    to understand your heart
    to value your goodness of soul

    My fair lady
    lovin is to cherish yet often underminded
    sometime respected, but seem rejected
    we hold this fairy tale close in quiet nights
    as love consumes guilt yet embraced
    my heart will not wilt , yet it will reach
    open arms to befriend as brother & sister

    Charmed in the glist of tomorrow
    beyond sin and lust yet passionate
    to the worth of ya soul in da utmost
    as i discover the inner beauty
    of a lost treasure i've found not to
    love in mates but to love as my friend
    my fair lady

    Ur such a rare rose flower one i searched
    in the finest picking in the most awkward
    way on the hardest soil as many flaunt
    themselves , i know i'm falling , falling
    deeply in love , it surely have a way to
    bring you down but feels so good when
    u bloom , floss , and rise in shine

    My heart stood beside you when u never
    knew it was there and it sheild you on
    the fate of dis belief , i appreciate every
    moment , i see u in the unsong nudity
    and heard the whispers in the grey winds
    as we touch mentals , o" how sweet it is

    Only your love lady have magical charm
    the gleam of morrow and befound beauty
    my love will never neglect,abuse or oppress
    but open the window of breeze to our
    means as one brother & sister who love
    not in rapture but our skin we reside and
    all we tame together

    Lovin maybe the fairy tale of many stories
    the sinful interlure of lust and the compassionate
    maze of mating but my fair lady
    this completed love is more then sex or a blueprint
    a simple book of a feeling as if it's an experiment
    maybe someday you can understand my love
    what it means and how i feel someday fair lady
    you will fall into the flawless of my arms and know
    I'm real and your one true friend in love .............
    :hearts2: :hearts1: :flowers: :ilu: :flowers: :hearts1: :hearts2:

    PEACE BE STILL WHILE MY HEART SPEAK !



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    NyneElementz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving this piece. These are just some of the feelings I'm scribing in volumes 4 and 5 of my chapbook about relationships. Matter of fact, let me give you a preview of one of the pieces that will be in it, called "It Takes A Fool".
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz i look forward to reading you and the script
    of it take a fool soon ..........................................
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are all different kinds of love, I guess we have to realize which kind is the best for which relationship. This was beautiful, you seem to be on a roll of late, I'll have to check out your other pieces.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sista Watz so true love is not just love but a form of how one
    see it or let's say use it in what manner , thank u for reading into the mindset
     
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    oooo....im jus lovin yo flo of luv my bratha aka rich in rhymes
    u drop err piece like its c4..yo work jus blowz up...lol..jp
    but most of all i was feelin it and i luv it


    blackluv and bp
     
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    hey man what does a gurl around here has to do to catch up with cha. oh i see im not thowing myself at cha like i used to. just kidding love love how you put it down cant wait for a part two to this.:jump:
     
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    Thankz GhettoAmbition for the visit and feeling this piece

    Hey Nevar big thankz sis , u know ya can catch me just above
    anytime just holla i haven't forgot and working on it fo sho ya know
    pt.2 is coming soon .......
     
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    This poem was a Declassification to a very dear and special person
    one day there eyes may peer unto this and know that i am and
    between tyme i'll continue on as i am , I hope she enjoy it in fullness

    Thank u all for visiting and showing love and warmth to these expression.
    Peace & Harmony
     
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