Quiet Poetry Lounge : my eyes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by beautyshows, May 24, 2012.

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    My eyes do they yet decisive..do they choose the ones who betray me??..looking every which way but yours..passing the beautiful scenery of a view that will love me once more..my eyes can't tell no more lies I can't keep them open no more..close close close..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da story of the eyes and what's seen and not to be seen great write....
     
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    Thank you
     
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    never close your eyes to the possibilities tomorrow brings. you may miss out on your happiness.

    keep scribin'
     
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