Black Poetry : My extreme flow slams like the theme of programs give

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Jul 26, 2007.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My extreme flow slams like the theme of programs give
    Viewers the impressions of doers and aggression many live
    In fright from police there’s no peace in their life so I chill
    Get compliments good behavior in the hood that’s a major thrill
    Like Lauren Hill miseducation can twist dedication and have you lost
    Brief in false beliefs, try sincere like a pioneer load my musket have no boss
    Code so **** it drove with bucket seats in car thinking about the cost
    My money all gone asked for a crummy small loan from the bank
    Disapproved left me is a pissed mood walked away mad pockets blank
    Having medical sources is like taking technical courses on penicilling
    And then filling your hands with pills to spill down your throat end willing
    To come as sleep
     
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    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight work rhyme, I would like to collab wit you sometime
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa rhymebad dis was phat and off da hook wit a curve
     
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    Liked the way you laid this flow rhymebad.
     
  5. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props on this one for real yall
     
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