Black Poetry : my essence...

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my essence...

    it cant be bottled for sale
    and if u do try it
    u can not run and tell
    but....
    my essence drips of sultry confidence...
    of tasty pleasures of hope....
    my essence dips inside me as it will into u
    it magnifies my glorries
    and exempts me from all my worries
    my essence....
    it propels my fears....
    ending... my limits
    streams of my essence follows my stride...
    it makes me glow.. uncontrollably..noticably....
    even afta all my lonely nights...
    i kno
    i kno u want it
    u want it so bad u'd do all to destroy its holder....
    ......my essence......
    man... i told u tho... my essence .. its not for sale...
    u cant sell THIS in a bottle
    u cant sell THIS in jus some store
    u cant buy THIS feeling from some peep show... where ur staring at all ur dreams....
    all ur desires...
    u cant buy THIS feeling
    I'M SORRY...IT'S ALL SOLD OUT....
    so u prolly wonderign..
    wat does it taste like....
    u see it comes in gallons drinkable only by the fealress....
    by the brave hunger clouds..above us.. that only desire all wat my essence is
    wat does it taste like...
    like flavoured rain drops from heavens cup.....
    wit cubes frozen full of HIS power
    floating amogst my essense
    and so ur prolly wondering....
    wat does it feel like...
    like...umm... when ur body's numb to all feeling and emotions
    but to only loves sensitivity
    does ur soul's temperature rise
    to warm....
    so ur prolly wondering....
    wat does it look like...
    like.. whew.. it looks like HIM....
    yeah like HIM.. i said it...
    that one that always maeks love to u so good
    in ur dreams
    that u wish ur eyes were foever sealed shut....
    cuz when u wake u can never see his face
    oooo.. o....yes.. it looks like HIM... like HIM....
    yes.. it taste like that
    and yes it feels like that...
    and o def does it look lie that
    so i kno u want some
    but like i said
    MY ESSENCE
    IT AINT FOR SALE.....SORRY!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now u said it here first
    sho nuff right da worth
    is priceless
     
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    flow it Poet of the week
    loving the vibe..Yes!!!!
    likes ya style
     
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    With an essence like that, someone would surely have to have equal essence to deserve to experience yours. Break it down sis, break it down.
     
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    I adore the imagery in this piece, daroc. You da poet of the week - flow on!
     
  6. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam... jus had to let people kno they cant buy my essence... let alone... our essence.......
     
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    do you think i can borrow some of dat? :lol:
    j/k....tyte flo...you gotta let em kno
    one love
    khasm
     
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    very nice. do your thang girl!
     
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    to know your essence and to
    be able to write about it so
    passionately...
    is true possession of the essence
    love the way you crafted this...

    Do yo thang..."Poet of the Week"...
    Watching you shine...
     
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    Aww I had to dance with the lovely tune of this. This made me feeeel good. Wonderful wonderful writing!

    -Muse
     
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