Black Poetry : my element

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to drown myself in music
    let it flow in over my head and
    fill every corner of my lungs
    I want it to overtake every nook
    and cranny of my consciousness
    I mean
    last I heard the world weighed
    something like 6.6 sectillion tons
    (sectillion? how many zero's is that?)
    what I know is that I weigh
    155lbs soak-n-wet holdin a brick
    and a ham sandwich
    I want to be caught up in the currents
    of a tyte melody
    lifted and carried off
    what a rapture that would be
    I wanna get lost in a phat track
    compellin me to make some noize
    over the top of it
    down in the depths of it
    and all through it
    like Jimi say
    "music sweet music I wish I could
    carress and kiss... kiss..."
    I need to be ingulfed in the sound
    innundated with the harmonies
    be it the mad bass that slaps the shore
    like a tsunami and rumbles and rolls
    over it
    or the mad highs that
    churn the insides like
    mad undertows
    I need to feel the flow
    be all up in it
    that is my element
    then I'd be at home...

    (c)06/03/Michael
     
  2. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Skrybe,

    Great piece!!

    Music captivates my soul too!!

    Peace to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    skrybe..........dis was str8 awesome

    that is my element
    then i'd be at home ............these lines done it !
    tyte scribe poet.
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WAUw skrybe 7 this is great!!!!!!!

    like jimmy said...:roll:
    keep writing....
    much love liberty
     
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    Feeling your melodic flow!
    Recap: I need to be ingulfed in the sound, innundated with the harmonies, be it the mad bass that slaps the shore,like a tsunami and rumbles and rolls,over it, or the mad highs that, churn the insides like, mad undertows,I need to feel the flow.

    This imagery of this scribe was smooth!
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yes...
    I do too love....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx fam.
    had to correct: Jimi not Jimmy.
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The flow has a sweet tempo, through the blessings of your pen. The songs of your ink represents it self, your work is excellent, I say that from the heart. Continue to burn the light, your mission is very strong.
     
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    i'm lovin' this! i can't even find the words...its like your describin' me or somethin'....this is so tyte!
     
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    I LOVE THIS!!!!! OMAN:LAUGH: I REALLY LOVED THE PART WHERE YOU SAID ABOUT HOW MUCH YOU WEIGHT HOLDIN THAT SANDWHICH.....O MAN....I WAS HOOKED SKY :)
     
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