Black Poetry : My Driveway

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Dec 3, 2003.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Driveway

    My driveway is like a jive play it’s cracked with bad
    Acts don’t know it’s roll (role) these facts are sad
    Tree roots grow underneath thunder my feet mad
    Tried to use a hatchet and a ratchet could break their hold
    Have a frequent plan to call the cement man but the price
    Is skyrocket, fry pockets of cats like me tried that twice //
    Cement in made of clay and limestone and stay in the crime zone
    Called streets of concrete which could pave your grave strong
    A body chalked after a party squalk sometime call cops on phone //
    Face slaughter by rain as the water don’t drain well pot holes
    Stop bowls of flow down hill, so around spills puddles untold
    Look I crave for brave pave to come save the day but no way
    My cash funny it smash crummy in my billfold hope the drama sway
    My Lex drop sits lopsided feel my rhyme wheels need aligned //
     
  2. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flo...... i like ;)
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mad , sad & bad .....flow on brutha MADD
    u drop a mean scribe here
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop like always..you keep drop them yo..
    i keep reading them... :angel1:
     
  5. Bluewater

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    yeah yeah i am feeling this 2 :)
    very nice
    Peace
     
  6. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Messed up but tight.

    One thing, bruh, U talk 'bout the money flow's slow, but U got a Lex droptop?lol

    Rockit tho, I'm feelin it.
     
  7. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW YALL REALLY CAME THROUGH ON THIS ONE THANKS FOR THE PROPS FOR REAL YALL