Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Dreams

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mlrteapot, Apr 14, 2001.

  1. mlrteapot

    mlrteapot Member MEMBER

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    The sweet touch of your lips,
    The sound of your voice,
    Your beautiful smile is no longer mine.
    I ache to hold you.
    The sun isn't as bright,
    And my nights are even darker now.
    Tears of sorrow shower my life everyday.
    My only place of peach and serenity from my sorrow
    are my dreams.
    There, my harsh reality isn't real and once again I am able to hold you.
    I am in a place where I can taste your sweet kisses,
    hear your voice and once again see your beautiful smile.
    But morning comes and I open my eyes to face my heart-rending reality, and I lye alone wishing all my feelings weren't here,
    and that you are still mine.
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    i too have been blessed with dreams
    when reality couldn't fill the void
    beautiful flow Mlrteapot
    please make yourself at home

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reality is sometimes...

    hard to swallow! I too have been here
    before...nice flow in this piece/peace~
    Thanks for sharing it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt all this deep emotional piece
    from your hearts dream
     
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    The beauty in remembering what was, the ache in knowing what has passed. Such a well written piece.
     
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