Black Poetry : My dreams....

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  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my dreams...


    they come from a child spirit
    state of mind and
    heart.......


    (7 years old)""I have a dream that my family will come together again ""

    "'I have a dream that People are happy"'

    "' i would like to sing for people and share music"'

    "' I dream that people will see me for who i am""

    "'i would like to travel around the world"'

    "'i would like to help people ""

    "'I would like to have a barbie with brown afro hair""

    "'I dream that i was a mermaid"'

    "'when i grow up i,ll find my prince and i get married....


    and we,ll have a baby..""


    "'I dream that i see god one day (that will never happen without dying)
    ... or jezus"'





    and manny more...






    My dreams....

    they come from a child spirrit ...

    state of mind...


    and heart...






    they speak to the soul within...

    and they give birth to visions and revelations.....



    i cherish these..




    these are mine ...

    these are youres....
    when i share them with you.....


    I keep them close to my heart...
    and follow "'the morning star'...





    follow....

    love....








    these are my dreams...




    and no one....


    can take..


    them away....




    from...








    me...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful dreams comes to beautiful hearts
    as yours my sis this was divine
     
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    this was nice flow poet flow on.
     
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    Dreams are a precious
    As precious as life itself
    Flow on poet
     
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    your day is ahead
    all u lone for and more ...keep dreammin
     
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    loved the journey

    Patrice
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, i loved this piece when you said it comes from a child heart. and when you said, "these are my dreams...




    and no one....


    can take..


    them away....




    from...








    me..." most real and deep, lovely, statement.... i captured this ... it uplifted my spirits... thank u... loved the delivery... D.S.
     
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