Black Poetry : MY DOWNFALL ****(da Juanita files)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My downfall those pink articulate lips
    Divinely flavoured portals to a mouth
    where souls dissolves ... eyez darting
    Beneath black brows, snares 4 da heart
    the milk white breasts, well shaped firmly
    the twins of my feast rosebud
    fair beyoung other flowers
    to itemize thus - to cast dog a bone
    secret as reeds of midas
    Da Poet's pen.............................$R
     
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    LOVER'S LAMENTATION

    Just when I think I can make it without you .
    I break down every time I hear about you.
    Just can't seem to forget you.

    It was always plain to me that loving you was my destiny.
    But you, you needed to be free.
    What you couldn't see is you could have been free with me.


    We shared our sadness and our dreams.
    Made love to dancing moon beams.
    Talked about what we wanted to be.
    And how you would love to grow old with me.

    500 miles you followed me you said you couldn't
    see living without me.
    I was all you would ever need, and you were so
    happy with me.
    Was it lust or just plain greed.

    Holding on to the promise we made,
    there was no doubt in my mind that the love could
    be saved. But you said it was over, you were having
    a ball. But while making love to her it's my name you call!

    Said you just wanted to leave me alone.
    Then like a junkie each week you would call me on the
    phone.
    Could it be that I was your "love jones".

    I know you wish you could come back home.
    But if you are coming can you come alone.
    And leave all the drama, and the women and streets.
    And join in peace where our two hearts meet.

    Stop trippin and tippin and love the ones at home.
    Or you may end up old and sad , tire and alone.
    Baby, how I wish you could have stayed at home.
    You know I miss you when you gone to long bjs(c)
     
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    WOW!!!

    Coming home just me along
    set aside my royality ride
    of striff and pain
    slowly whispers of yo name
    caress my thoughts and the
    love i sought ......can it be
    our love u see
    coming home been gone to long
    ready for right leaving da wrong
    coming home !

    (thankz a million 4 da beautiful reply):heart: :kiss:
     
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    Re: WOW!!!

    :cool: My personal disclaimer, althouth intense emotions were evoked by this poem, the response itself was meant to be
    a Public Post to the Poetry Flow. Charge it to my head and not my:heart: HOWEVER SHOULD THE WINGS OF FATE, REFLECT MORE FONDLY OUTCOMES MY HEART WOULD LEAP...AS Sheakspeare might say if he were a real Mack! ONE LOVE!
     
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    well now

    u said a mouth full
     
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    Re: well now

    Oh I am so embarassed!!!
     
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    be not shame

    forth every word is greatful
    my heart say so..........my mental know so
    ya one in a million...:)
     
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