Black Poetry : My DoJo... (Im Back)

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dam it seems like it's been an eternity since I droped
    and soo many poets have came to Des and laid nice spots

    I laid back with my mind in this mental block
    poetry seemed to make my mind go flop

    But this has to stop!

    So I guess I write myself out this funk,
    so I will name this style the poetic monk

    hhuummmmmm

    master said "your poetic style is pretty good"
    But I'm taking this back to the Wood and the Hood.

    Im back in my dojo perfecting my stance
    Inserting the can's and deleteing the cant's

    We are going to exit the dragon and enter the Python
    I'm going to win this battle so dam the fight's on.

    Hold up..
    Hold Up..

    My bad I forgot to hit talk request
    only my chat room fam knows this part of des!

    If you aint been in chat then visit it I suggest
    Nuff said on that no more no less

    Now back to my dojo so I can retain my Mojo
    let's keep this flow on DC style... you Know "The Go Go"

    Most cats remind me of a Jim kelly Hook...
    Mannnnn You Come Straight Out Of A Commicbook!

    I'm busting poets heads with my nun chuck mike's
    So u think your kung Fu is better than mine?
    Yeah right !
    Sike.............
    Don't believe the hype
    I've seen your type
    I've seen you fight
    I've seen all your skills
    believe me u not that tight!

    Me? Well im the street fighter slash Mortal Combat type
    aahhhhuuukiiit then "Finish Him" Right!

    Transform into my Python form and swallow U whole
    Spit out your bones and deviour your soul

    Im back In my Dojo and it's been 2 long
    now im teaching my students to "Wax off and Wax On"

    Whoa this has been a long time coming But I'm glad im back
    So Now all my Chat room fam.. "where ya at ?"

    I'm the 2nd Deadly venom so call me the snake
    I bring my python to the ring like my 1st name was jake

    I started my style am one of MD's illest Mc's
    But now I have evolved my skill to straight poetry

    I needed to recharge my skill so I sliped in Bluewaters "geisha bath"
    then I viewed destee's picture craft

    My Geisha bath needed more steam
    so added the collab ot the "EXTREME"

    I was given "poetry Anew" from a blackangel with sight
    Blakverb droped "A Lover's dance"...mad tight!

    I had visions from up above
    sage droped me some"The Sagecious Scientology of Love"

    "the (((((((())))))) poem..." by Khasm13
    showed his smooth style as his pen did a lean.

    Triniti showed us the way with a heartbreak teardrops
    "ATTN FAMILY...for our sista Mzblkangel"
    This kind of love will never stop!

    I read "Chickens let to the slaughter"
    also the sisters "Man Tease"
    reminded me of battles of deff Mc's

    Ladies we love yall fannies
    I guess that's why Monetary wrote"Them Blue Panties"

    Oh By the way Nita u crazy
    I read "The Caller I.D. Lady"

    LOL





    CP
    4/2/2004
     
  2. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a fresh comback here!
    Gives me the feeling of freestyling on the corner


    I like it poet, I like it




    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave:
    likes ya flow
    glad ya back
    been a min indeed
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Python...

    I'll kick the mess outta you with Noob....Jaxx....or old school Sub Zero...lol
    Naw this was a nice come back...
    It's good to see you back again :wink:
    :heart:
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PYTTTTTTHHHHOOOONNNNNN!!!!!! WASSSUPPPP BROTHA!!! We've missed u...u know i gots love fo ya loved the poem...
    :heart:
    -Mz. Bahavin
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks alot for the love on here... It's nice to return. yes I miss the frestyle days. ;)

     
  7. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes it has and I hated to have be gone like that.
    But im back and loving it. :coffee:

     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What?? Did she just say that.... Tell me she did'nt just say that! ( Booker T )
    LOL... U sooooooooooo lucky I can't snap ya arms off over the net..LOL
    Where is chemelion where u need him??
    thanks Nita Mae jenkins...LOL

     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lil sis !!!!!!!!!!!!
    I missed u all also. But im back now so it's on and poppin :jumping:

     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice to read ya again, flow some more....
     
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