Black Poetry : My Diary ....sec. 336 end page

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My Diary is one long story
    a love letter of thee
    u been my artist rainbow
    through times and space

    I've sit inside our most vivid impression'
    of our most adorable encounters
    and have u as my reminiscence
    of a sweeter more voluptuous day

    I think of love and u in my heart
    as u cross envision of my morrow
    my breath stand still at da helms
    of your essence and the depth
    of your beauty

    I can feel a sunshine stealing in my soul
    beyond da winter maze and artic cold
    as each thorn pinning me a rose blooms
    as i capture in your eyes the unknown joys

    I love thee as u are
    that has me overwhelmingly
    devastatingly in love with u
    that i'm so possessively held
    exorbitantly submissively

    I've become so incoherently
    insatlably u made me so passionately
    despairingly our love touched a dream
    where we became flirtatiously
    and frivolously also coquettishly


    Before my pen rest and locketh of thee book
    i leave my tear stain upon da page and love
    in the mind of your thoughts for i am that i am
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one was so touching, I don't quite know what to say, except that...if you feel her that strongly and love her that deeply, odds are, that she also feels you in the depths of her essence, and loves you so much her soul cries out. Whew...
     
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    If i could put in words the inner emotions
    a story would be told before my eyez but words won't give justice upon thy feet
    so i sit in da mazement and enjoy da essence that's fircy and beautiful
    thank u watz for your forever warmth and love shown ......wow !
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Huuuuuuuuuhhhhhhh......
    $$Rich$$

    ................

    :bye:
     
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    sure thing ! Thankz for the visit and love shown sis
     
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    Never ending tale, a forever diary that keepest pages of life maze
    where i fall into such clash wit pen & pad i write of thee openly
    maybe oneday we shall come to knoweth of each others love
    as i script da stroll wit words unheard yet felt , behold my loveth
    thy passion is of thee yet one not hear me nor knoweth that i am !
     
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    Hey Brother $$RICH$$
    I truly enjoyed the story of love that you let
    US all peep in from your dairy. Very beautiful
    And deep.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    A clashing beauty thank u sista for thy shall forever loveth thee
    as i pen her most inner soul to pages
     
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    ok ok

    i can't be mad

    i just thought you were going to take it "there" with this

    when i say diary

    lol
     
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    i started to go there but hit it wit a twist so'ja ....lol thankz a million bruh
     
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