Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Desire...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jan 1, 2008.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For I am his desire
    as he is mine
    A smooth Chablis
    a mellow glass of wine
    His taste, his bouquet
    his very being
    tempts me
    He seduces my spirit
    deeply into his energy
    His own unique flavor
    complements mine
    into a sip of splendor to savor
    I do not seek that perfect cup of coffee
    not even contemplating that brew
    I desire that cup of Joe, that oft tempts
    me to sample, for just one taste won't do
    Not only will he cascade through my mind
    But the raw juice of his nectar will course
    through...my...veins...
    for love, is this current's source
    Not just of me, but in me
    For I am his desire,
    as he is mine
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    for his desires is of thee
    for a queen to be happily
    the love abound is joy
    once they mix down to da core
    look like Joe gonna be happy
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sis Watz! You brought it my sistah...analogies of wine and coffee...running through our veins...LOVE THIS!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hope Joe will be so happy he's percolating, Rich. Thank you oh so much.
    Thank you HopelisRomantic for your lovely praises poetic sis.
     
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    hi Sister wazi
    Now this flow was just so sweet,
    and i feel the complements of
    brother Rich scribe
    awesome and truly wonderful

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey there Sister Blu. Thank you so much for your sweet response.
     
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