Black Poetry : My Deepest Desire is Quiata

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need closure
    For my heart rings out true
    How I wish my destiny was with you
    I long to feel your kiss
    I long to feel the dip of your hips
    Closure is what I need
    To satisfy this urge deep inside
    This longing desire that cannot be quenched
    I remember the day
    I kissed you and a melody rang out
    Quiata’s song composed
    To become my lifeforce
    And my motivating factor for loving
    Especially when I’m loving you.
     
    Bishop, Nov 13, 2001
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    from what I know of "closure"

    it's a very tricky, sticky thang.......
    when we specify these especially delicious acts of "closure" , they most often serve to only open new doors......

    ummhmmm....nice piece Bishop....

    a
     
    alyce, Nov 13, 2001
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell the truth Alyce....That closure is a powerful thang !!!!
     
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    Closure is one of life's beautiful and almost always painful exercises. Beautiful piece my brother.

    BE
     
    Heartbeat, Nov 13, 2001
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    It might be a matter of faith
    We all been their done that and we know that closure will come in the morning the only question is which morning, but until then we must have faith in the process knowing that good things come to those who wait.
     
    shaz, Nov 14, 2001
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    its a sweet truth unknown thang but reach for it bishop
    its within:)
     
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