Black Poetry : My Dearest Slain Soldier..............

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  1. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many remember you as Mr. Shakur, the late Tupac Amaru,

    early September 1996 at age 18, i felt my life was through,

    your milk-chocolate complexion, would match mine to a "T",

    if I was yo' chick, you'dve lived the "Snug Life", stead of foolin w/dat groupie,

    Named after an Indian warrior, yet stood proud & tall as an African diety,

    even had names for our future fraternal twins: Mack-A-Velli, and Marsha-Velli,

    you left this hell for another peaceful one at the tender age of 25,

    your light still shines on millions of us, to me you're still alive,

    As my life was beginning, yours was ending, guess i'll see you next lifetime,

    how could a hater snuff the life from my Boo :crying:, at the mere drop of a dime?,

    whichever realm you exist, keep it thuggin', do ya thizzle, I Ain't Mad Atcha,

    posters, and T-shirts cling to my wall, so your Essence I can truly capture,

    No god lives forever, yes indeed we know fa sho',

    the fool who did you in, better look out, i suggest that sucka lay low




    Wait In Peace...:kiss:



    :angel1:

    :missu:

    :sand:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful yet death threatning poet lol
    I like the salute to one of our fallen black brothas
    You Know I appreciate
    Dear Momma
    Brendas Got a Baby
    California Love
    America Most Wanted
    Much Love Sista Poet of the week
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhhh! yes deep and heavy
    u painted a perfect picture i
    can feel itwithin my soul........
     
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    what an fitting tribute flow on poet.
     
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    HI spicybrown
    This is a great salute
    He is my number one
    Top poet, and we all
    miss him so much
    Name after an Indian warrior, yet stood proud&tall as an African diety,
    Yes Yes Yes...
    Wonderful tribute sis
    Keep the flow flowing poet

    Ashe

    Peace Unto You
     
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    This was a great ode to Tupac, one must wonder where he'd be now had he have lived. Do your thang poet of the week.
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys, appreciate the support, swore he was my soulmate tho
    :spinn:
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bumpin' this one wayyy back up...it's been 10 years:angel1:

    :love:
     
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    yes

    revenging this will never die

    the brilliance snuffed out again

    we know it all too well
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    spicy spicy:
    This scribe is the ****!!!
    Thanks for brining it back.


    Much Luv
     
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