Quiet Poetry Lounge : my dearest love...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Dearest Love
    It is with “Deepest Respect”
    And “Sincerest Regret”
    That I come to you
    “Begging Forgiveness”
    For having IGNORED you these last few hours
    Normally, I would shower you with
    Gratitude & Endearments
    And Promises of Lasting Devotions
    Never allowing the NOTION of a
    “You Without Me” thought
    To enter your Consciousness
    So, I come
    Begging a REprieve
    And hoping you believe
    When I say, It shall not happen again
    This…grievous sin
    I’ve perpetrated against you
    It’s true
    Love has no bounds
    And my boundless heart
    Does jump with joy
    At the thought of “Loving You”
    So, please
    FORGIVE ME my oversight
    In not seeing the plight
    My ignorance would cause
    Loneliness
    Missed opportunities
    But let not our RELATIONSHIP fall
    For, an EGREGIOUS error it would be
    To forego the future NICEties of a
    “You and Me”
    Forgive me, Please.
     
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    MsVeraisblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luv: You are forgiven... If this was written in a Halmark card i would definitely buy it. What a beautiful way to say this to your love. :love:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    every second of our relationships should be appreciated...held sacred. sometimes, given our array of things to do, we fail to do that. it is for all those times, i apologize. THANKS for reading...and for the love.
     
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    Dear Brother Poet Baller,

    The warmth of this piece is incredibly endearing. The lines...

    "“Begging Forgiveness”
    For having IGNORED you these last few hours"
    ...completely melted me. The last few hours?! How beautiful. Thank you for writing...for feeling...for sharing this wonderful piece.​
    (smile)
     
  5. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    been MIA for a time, eh? i see...i notice...i take note.:)

    loving is a thing that we do. sometimes, our love is taken (for granted), during moments of haste...of rush...of multi-tasking. during those moments, we sometimes forget that we have that other side that begs acknowledgement. maybe taken for granted is the wrong phrase. but the object of our love should never feel as though they're second to anything.:) sometimes it's necessary for us to apologize for making our love one feel "unappreciated."

    THANKS for the love.
     
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    Unfortunately, my friend, my offline life doesn't always permit the time to come play on the playground. I miss you all dearly when this happens, though. Besides, recent events here made it impossible for me to stay away one more second. <wink>

    (smile)

    I always enjoy your after poem repartee.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a finely developed friendship is a thing of beauty...that is to be treasured.:) for all times. deeply valued in its total(ness)view.

    be blessed.
     
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