Black Poetry : My Dearest Love...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Dearest Love

    It is with “Deepest Respect”
    And “Sincerest Regret”
    That I come to you
    “Begging Forgiveness”
    For having IGNORED you these last few hours
    Normally, I would shower you with
    Gratitude & Endearments
    And Promises of Lasting Devotions
    Never allowing the NOTION of a
    “You Without Me” thought
    To enter your Consciousness

    So, I come
    Begging a REprieve
    And hoping you believe
    When I say, It shall not happen again
    This…grievous sin
    I’ve perpetrated against you

    It’s true

    Love has no bounds
    And my boundless heart
    Does jump with joy
    At the thought of “Loving You”

    So, please

    FORGIVE ME my oversight
    In not seeing the plight
    My ignorance would cause
    Loneliness
    Missed opportunities
    But let not our RELATIONSHIP fall
    For, an EGREGIOUS error it would be
    To forego the future NICEties of a
    “You and Me”

    Forgive me, Please.
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reminds me of the ode to poetry after the ink has dried, our the time has passed, or the thoughts slow.

    i hope the 'Love' forgives you after an apology like that...i would..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow...what a statement to a dear love that seem forgotten in da moment of time
    only to re-a-sure it's still strong and real forgiveness can't help but be granted !!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mistakes can be made, sometimes, easily, with one of the last people that we would ever want to hurt. Hopefully, after an honest apology, you shall be forgiven. Earnestly flowed.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Asking for forgiveness can be as rewarding as forgiving.


    Enjoyed the read!


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    My Dearest Love

    It would take more than a few hours,
    a few days,
    months or years,
    Before this broad smile even
    turn into tears.

    No need for regrets my love,
    no need to forgive,
    the few hours you left,
    in my heart's where you lived.

    I know that your love for me,
    is stronger than life
    and the times we're apart dear
    ...I never think twice.

    That "you without me" thought,
    never came into play,
    my vow is to love, keep and cherish you...
    forever and a day.
    Does that answer your question,
    of me forgiving you my sweet?
    It's the "you with me" ...
    that makes us complete!

    you're forgiven
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i see you have remorse

    for what happened and you're asking for forgiveness because you recognize
    a mistake was made

    MANNING UP, and i'm not mad at cha

    I APPLAUD YOU

    you recognize what is important to you nothing wrong with that
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my friends...

    never should we be so proud that we refuse to acknowledge our errors...and ask forgiveness for our transgressions. and, when sincerely asked, never should we be too full of ourselves to forgive those asking. UNTIL WE LEARN FORGIVENESS, WE SHALL NOT BE FORGIVEN.

    THANKS for reading.

    and the river floweth.
     
  9. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queentswana...

    THANK YOU, for that wonderful flow...to continue the river of contentment. a masterful job of forgiveness, it was.

    BUT…What if I part
    With nary a concern
    Would you wait by the river
    Until my return

    Would you welcome me home
    Or, toss me away
    Would that day be special
    Or just another day

    If I explained all the sorrow
    That drove me away from you
    Would you forgive me for going
    Or ban me…from you
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller:
    If she doesn't forgive you
    I DO!!!!!!
    That's how sincere this piece
    comes across...You made my
    heart melt.



    Much Luv
     
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