Black Poetry : My Day Will Come

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sista Steele, Feb 25, 2003.

  1. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One day
    My day
    Will be here
    It’s clear

    I mean crystal
    You hear
    What I say
    Do you hear

    I long to be happy again
    To laugh and smile again
    To honestly say
    Everything is fine again

    c 2002 ST
     
  2. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hearing you loud and clear Sista! You keep staying positive & full of faith & thinks will definitely be alright. Peace & Blessings to you!
     
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    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    felt like i could hear you speakin this out loud

    dope piece

    one luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da inner beauty of ya soul
    shall smile
    and laughter will fill ya heart
    i hear u loud & clear from here !
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CRYSTAL CLEAR

    On a clear day you will be happy- forever. Nice work!

    1poetsought
     
  6. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Legacy - It's an honor to receive your response.

    Mind~Soul - Can you hear me now?...Good! Thanks.

    Rich - Just reading your responses filles my heart with joy.

    1poet - Thank you. I'm always lookin out for your work.
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like a good daily affirmation!

    I tell myself something positive everyday...I firmly believe as the scriptures say that "As a man thinketh so shall he/she be!". So each day I look at the affirmation on me and my dogs picture that says and I quote "Lord God, I expect great things of you; please help me to attempt and accomplish great things for you!"
    I believe it, and chile what you are saying is far more possible than some of the stuff I tell myself as I ammend my lil affirmation.
    But, I feel you when pain and sadness comes and stays too long...ya just want to sing a new song! Try "Everywoman!" that is my number one uplifter....Love ya!

    Blessings On Ya House!:grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug:
     
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    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CRYSTAL.............

    ON A "CLEAR" DAY YOUR WORDS CAN MAINTAIN THE PEACE.
     
  9. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sherykah - I am. I know no other way.

    Mslb - your words are like gold. At the time I wrote this it seemd like the sadness would never leave. Thanks for your response.

    Nini - Peace is something I'm definitely in search of. Thanks for your post.
     
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    Sista, it sounds to me like u be needing a 1 nite man ;)

    I sound like a Grandma, but time heals all wounds. Besides you gotta meet a few Mr Wrongs to finally recognise Mr Right.

    *Emma*