Black Poetry : my daily self-evaluation

BlatinaPoet4u

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:deal: Just a lil' sumthin i wrote this morning when i woke up cuz i was bored!!! Enjoy! :deal:




i stare in the mirror,
pinching the skin around my stomach
molding it into the ideal shape.

i wish that i could look like her,
the girl in the magazine
i compare our hair and teeth
our skins our lips.

with every look my self esteem vanishes
losing confiedence, my smile soon fades and my
flaws,seem endless and numbered ,as i quickly fall
into a state of sadness and put on a baggy sweat
shirt ,concealling my dreams and pretending i dont
care.

slowly and realistically i begin to accept my
image and idenitiy repathing to myself that i am
the only me, and that is a good thing!!! :spin: :x: :spin:






{hope you like. please tell me what you think!!!}
thanks
 

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