Black Poetry : My Creation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Apr 20, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My room alone
    at home as my
    mental mind roam
    paper in hand matching
    da pen out the window
    creation blinds
    together poetic scribe
    a poem by verse
    no longer hide
    to river down to pad
    a script of da mind
    look what i had
    given birth to a flow
    and created it in
    a row so to this page
    i let it leak
    bringing it sweet & meek
    soft lines in between
    a musical rapture sings
    crafty care free flow
    from da room only i know
    the comfort of caressin
    hope & prayer leave a
    feeling i lone to bare
    my handz are the master
    the pen is my tongue
    to the pad who seal da fate
    it's my creation :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and what a creation it was
    tight smooth lay here
    diggin it
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    when da mind roam it can pen down some of the most
    un told creations and with feelings makes it a masterpiece
    so alone in my room i write the things not understood but
    what can't be comprehend.
    Thankz sistah
     
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    Rich luv you are truly talented and what I love about when you write is you never now whats coming up next. You always do your thang and I love every bit of it.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling this process of peaceful creative flow. Nicely worded, serenely felt.
     
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    THANK U shortylove21.........i try my best at what i do and hope it's good enough

    yes watz.......the soft low sweet flowing of da hand when ya mind release Thankz
     
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    (smilin) :bowdown: :luvv:
    What else can I say?
     
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    thankz purplemoons in da humble way sistah Queen
    u suga sweet .......well i better not say i might write
    dat erotic script......lol
     
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    LOL! hahaha!
    Don't you dare start!
    I might just post
    my reply to your
    latest post!
    I'll really be banned
    fo sho, or blackballed
    :court: LOL!
     
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    lol........ok
    i won't start but i like to finish
    time i get extreme on ya yeap
    i better get it ready !
     
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