Black Poetry : My confessions....

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Usher can confess so can I
    I know it won't hurt for me to try

    Things been Chilli between us
    It seems all we do is fuss

    I just need a little TLC
    To make me feel complete

    It has taken so many Lil Jon and Lil Flip to see
    That you and me was never to be

    These Goodies I have are Locked Up
    I'll think I will Fall Down to your warming touch

    Sometimes I think we drink too much Crunk Juice
    One sip and it has us Acting a Fool

    Can Alicia really keep my secrets
    She says she has the Keys I feel no regrets

    I just want More and More from you
    So why do I continue to be your fool

    Somtimes I wish you would Jump Off
    All this madness has me doing the Fat Man Stomp

    You know we can not continue this way
    Seeing young Bo there's No Play in G.A.

    So boo until we meet again have a nice life
    When you finish this line I'm probably your friend wife

    Holla at cha playa!!!!!!!!
     
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    Seems like it shouldn't take much for a relationship to work out, I know... Liked the way you incorporated all the singers and songs in this piece. This was a fun read. Welcome to Destee. Make yourself at home.
     
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    thankyou for reading my poem. i also thank you for the welcoming. i feel at home being here. this site isn't like the others they seem to accept no matter how you represent yourself.
     
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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    vey nice write and indeed confess look to read more
    of u soon and share the love of poet's welcome Nevar
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    welcome...and thanks for bringing me uptodate on all those different artists...some (i must admit) i didn't know but will now check out..
    thank you so much for the flow...
     
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    thankyou for the kind words
     
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    It was very clever how you put this one together.

    WELCOME, WELCOME to our crazy, mixed up family :pie:
     
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    Alizentang said it well.

    Welcome to Destee. I enjoyed the flow.
     
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    Reading this agian makes me reflect on how we see so much potential in others they can't see or realize in themselves. Whats up with that?

    Maybe the juice is blinding, maybe the attempt is mad.
    But if you know or believe in something or someone.
    It does open up a chance for happiness and can make us sad.
    Especially when it doesn't work out.
    But its not wasted time to find out.
    It was worth the effort.

    So now you know.
    It's time to move on
    in this life we flow.

    Travelers we are, sometimes in the dark and blind.
    Sharing pleasures, like thought and like mind.
    I see the trip and the effort clear.
    I would have spent the time
    by myself if not here.

    So forget the time, look at the prize,
    see the potential, the love in anothers eyes.

    I have seen. I know others have seen this too.
    In both sexes when they enter a door or entrance they come thru.
    They Paralyze you in awe.
    Makes it worth the life.

    So the effort is taken to make them part of your life.
    Sometimes it works, just a little while.
    Sometimes its wasted tears in the admires eyes.
    Some wells are deep.Some are dry. Some kick up dry dirt in your loving eye. Dig another, plenty fish in the sea.
    Smile at him, smile at her.
    Smile all the time at me.

    You play yourself, they play you too.
    But wasn't the attempt all along was to satisfy you.

    So take what you get.
    Sometimes thats all there is.
    They missed the essense you have to give.

    I look back and still love ten years ago.
    Imagine I still love them that strong I didn't know.

    Keep moving.

    Keep living in this life we have.
    Enjoy it.
    Everyday is a party just trying to live.
     
  10. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    uhh you got me wanting more of your poetic flow i love the way you capture your reader with your words. to me you mean what you say you pratice what you preach. your deep and thats what i like in a writer who not afraid to cross any boundaries.
     
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